1702-E is good but needs to be brighter.
I used this online editor to make it a bit brighter.
https://www4.lunapic.com/editor/?action=newbright
1702-E
Don't forget, this picture has been taken at sunset/dusk, so brightening it up too much will be un-natural. I think that touched up picture is a bit too bright now, and it seems some of the original colour has been taken out as well because it has been brightened.
Here is one I've tried by adding a bit of brightness, but then also added more colour, a bit of pop, a little warmth and some skin tone and deep blue to compensate the brightness increase 😉