so im new at websits

[enndaley]

First off, Use a capital letter to start sentences (how - How) a single i should also be capitalized (i - I) guessing nee d doesn't need a space, and a diser WTF is that, maybe you meant designer? Plus you say little twice when only one is necessary, Then either a coma or a period ( , or .) Capitalize the (W -What) again the (i - I) chage is misspelled its change, again the (i - I) period.

And this is only the correction for this sentence..............

That's what happens when you type with your elbows. Although it might be some kind of hipster slang...

 

[John_8581]

Good luck to you fallhell.

Why do you have a .tk domain? What's the point of your site?

First off, Use a capital letter to start sentences (how - How) a single i should also be capitalized (i - I) guessing nee d doesn't need a space, and a diser WTF is that, maybe you meant designer? Plus you say little twice when only one is necessary, Then either a coma or a period ( , or .) Capitalize the (W -What) again the (i - I) chage is misspelled its change, again the (i - I) Question mark ( ? ). Also there is two helps and two like's when only one is necessary.

And this is only the correction for this sentence..............

How like I need a designer, some one to help me a little. What do I need to change and I will do?

Well I followed xfire's suggestion... I looked up the .tk domain in wikipedia. It is the internet country code of Tokelau, a territory of New Zealand. My guess is that English is not your native language. Yes, I can understand your point of how difficult it would be to use and select the proper word in English in the context of your sentences.

But if English is your native language... you'll then need to get away from using slang words, and "texting" phrases. That "texting will be the death of the English language, as we know. Thank you is what it is. Not ty. Sorry to be a hindrance here...

Like everyone is saying you do need to spell better and use proper punctuation and grammar.

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

Good luck to you fallhell.




Well I followed xfire's suggestion... I looked up the .tk domain in wikipedia. It is the internet country code of Tokelau, a territory of New Zealand. My guess is that English is not your native language. Yes, I can understand your point of how difficult it would be to use and select the proper word in English in the context of your sentences.

But if English is your native language... you'll then need to get away from using slang words, and "texting" phrases. That "texting will be the death of the English language, as we know. Thank you is what it is. Not ty. Sorry to be a hindrance here...

Like everyone is saying you do need to spell better and use proper punctuation and grammar.

Errr...he's from the US.

 

[Justanothergirl]

Wow...

 

[LadyMira]

Reminds me of an old 70's retro website. You'll get better.

Haha, a 70's website? That's pretty damn retro, I didn't even know there were webpages back then! Best description.

 

[Mr Dragon]

well i went and looked at SpexyAshleigh site and i made some changes still working on it tho

 

[Ulysses31]

well i went and looked at SpexyAshleigh site and i made some changes still working on it tho

hopefully the first change you made then was replacing yourself with a hot blonde on the cam :dunno:

 

[John_8581]

Errr...he's from the US.

No. Really?? Hehe. That's funny. I guess fallhell will need to get better writing skills then. He seems to like you.

 

[Mr Dragon]

i dont like SpexyAshleigh i love her but im trying here

 

[Tittyman5000]

I'm not sure but I think this guy is mentally challenged............ I've seen his youtube
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[Mr Dragon]

i have Asperger syndrome ok asss

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

Sorry about your Aspergers...seriously, sorry. But how can you SPELL Asperger and not the word 'friend'? :/

Seriously don't worry about what everyone is saying, just listen to me because you love me and I love you. Just use a spellchecker on the text on your site. Then you'll be good to go.

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

Actually, use spellchecker on here too.

 

[Ace Bandage]

how like i nee d a diser to help a little like some one to help me a little what do i need to chage and i will do

well what does my site need like i need to know what to add ans remove i need a desinger or some thing i want it to be alsome i think its good but hell what do i know

well can some one help me tell me what needs to be speel right or what ever

Has anyone really been far as decided to use even go want to do look more like?

 

[Tittyman5000]

I still feel sorry 4 u

 

[Mr Dragon]

OK SpexyAshleigh i can spell that because of Google OK but funny has this may be ur name is wrong so i guess ill have to add it to the list so its not wrong

 

[busenbust]

will it be a paid-for website ?


:yahoo:

 

[Mr Dragon]

No im making it.

 

[xfire]

Having ass burgers is like saying you're only mildly retarded. I'm not buying.

 

[alexpnz]

"so im new at websits"


Sooo...... does that make you a Spider?