so im new at websits

[Mr Dragon]

well idk i thought it was worth it i looks kelw to me i think i did good its my blog wooo

 

[Supafly]

well idk i thought it was worth it i looks kelw to me i think i did good its my blog wooo

Dunno what ya smoked, but you could settle for half of that ^^

 

[PirateKing]

I'm qualified to critique this post.

Results:
:ban:

I'm allowed to critique your retorts.

results:

 

[xfire]

Why do you have a .tk domain? What's the point of your site?

 

[L3ggy]

I'm allowed to critique your retorts.

results:

You're Caesar now?

 

[PirateKing]

No, I'm Joaquin Phoenix.

*sticks gum in L3ggy's fur*

 

[~~whimsy~~]

You really just admitted to that???

 

[PirateKing]

I miss River.

 

[L3ggy]

No, I'm Joaquin Phoenix.

 

[PirateKing]

Adult Image Hosting

 

[mrtrebus]

He's Swedish, they're all blonde assholes who love putting people down. Plus he isn't human.

You're right. Apart from the last bit.

 

[HE1FiNEARTiST]

i wanna make a website!!! with porn and pics of sluts and couples banging and then you can go to the message board and talk and...... oh wait.....

 

[Patrick_S]

The welcome message on the first page need some punctuation, it makes no sense as it is now.

 

[sayvara]

i made a website and im new at it and i need to know how i did on my site

http://fallhell.tk/

Constructive criticism: you're too focused on flashy gadgets. Those never make a website. You are technicly proficient in putting them there... which is good. But that alone is not why people come to a website.

/S

 

[Ulysses31]

Thanks for the epileptic fits, I always love being rushed to hospital mid afternoon

 

[Kingfisher]

It seems fine. Please start spelling like a human being, not a retarded teenager who dropped out of school at 5. Use capitals, things like that. Don't help to endorse stupidity.

 

[SpexyAshleigh]

Not that I'm an expert, because my blog is hella basic, but I think the layout is pretty decent for a first try. But yeah dude, you need to use proper grammar, spelling, punctuation, sentence structure....if you could write properly, then people will think your site is decent, but right now it looks like a four year old made it simply because of the grammatical and spelling errors. But otherwise, looks good.

 

[rock hard]

Yep....spell check is your friend. I am not dissing you but it is obvious that you are not the sharpest knife in the drawer....however...there are add-ons for your web browser that will tell you when You Misspell a word, and even suggest possible words that are spelled correctly...you can make yourself more understandable, which would be a good start!! :2 cents:

 

[busenbust]

websits? like push-ups u mean ///

 

[grls101]

wtf