alexpnz
Lord Dipstick
Fine, just remember....I got 60% off the top from her!
Hey Hey Ry Ry, Your one hell of a guy....Thanx :glugglug::1orglaugh
After watching Eminems Not Afraid video
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Fine, just remember....I got 60% off the top from her!
Hey Hey Ry Ry, Your one hell of a guy....Thanx :glugglug::1orglaugh
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GibbsGrad2002
Mr. Nice gallery
The video was cool
what's this thread about again? i lost track halfway through...
haha sorry bout no punctuation i just really bored and posted it too see what people had to say
i had a good laugh outta this
i had a good laugh outta this
I know I suck but its w.e im just having some fun (lol at the negative rep i got)
Ima rap about these valiums , oh hell , i fuckin love em,
Just sit back , and watch me chug em and chug em ill even hug em ,
Cuz the lil bastards will try , and try to find inside me , the love , which is lost , and by , which binds me ,
and it gives me , the need , to be high and fly and watch out ,
cuz here comes the sky , (beat switch) crashin down on me , but just a metaphor ,
for this door i walked out of on this little whore , who said twice she not , loved me , more than once , im a dunce , for believing her and her little runts she calls kids ,
Its attack of the devil man , a pain inside , by which everything in my life , becomes a lie ,
The drugs i am on , im nothin but a pawn , to this game of life and i will drop the bomb ,
But a lil bit a help , my cry my yelp , all i need is to be helped and no one helps ,
so i go down to my basement , and find my weed , my good ol shit , puts me on my feet ,
and then i lose all my cares , for this world we live , i cannot describe the pain , only hope for a kid , whos lost like me , and talks like me , cept im hoping that he turns out to be , the greatest mother fucker , the world has seen , someone so much better than bitch ass me ,
then i sit back , and i watch , and i laugh , my ass off ,
then i come to my senses , that all is not lost ,
cuz i was right bout this kid , look at him now, look at him wow , hes a fuckin millionare , how oh how , (beat change)
so , i get up , and i look , how the fuck , was i took , by these drugs , in my book , like a crook , on a nook , im ashamed , of this day , that is laid , out to me , look at me , fuck it man , look at him , look at slim , im a wreck , im a mess , im a worn out dress , that needs to be fixed , so i get , off my ass , one more time , for this rhyme , and put it , in a record , and sell it like dime---bags , no longer in rags , filled with money , something to brag---about . . .
guess thats why they call it rags to riches mother fucker
Ima rap about these valiums , oh hell , i fuckin love em,
Just sit back , and watch me chug em and chug em ill even hug em ,
Cuz the lil bastards will try , and try to find inside me , the love , which is lost , and by , which binds me ,
and it gives me , the need , to be high and fly and watch out ,
cuz here comes the sky , (beat switch) crashin down on me , but just a metaphor ,
for this door i walked out of on this little whore , who said twice she not , loved me , more than once , im a dunce , for believing her and her little runts she calls kids ,
Its attack of the devil man , a pain inside , by which everything in my life , becomes a lie ,
The drugs i am on , im nothin but a pawn , to this game of life and i will drop the bomb ,
But a lil bit a help , my cry my yelp , all i need is to be helped and no one helps ,
so i go down to my basement , and find my weed , my good ol shit , puts me on my feet ,
and then i lose all my cares , for this world we live , i cannot describe the pain , only hope for a kid , whos lost like me , and talks like me , cept im hoping that he turns out to be , the greatest mother fucker , the world has seen , someone so much better than bitch ass me ,
then i sit back , and i watch , and i laugh , my ass off ,
then i come to my senses , that all is not lost ,
cuz i was right bout this kid , look at him now, look at him wow , hes a fuckin millionare , how oh how , (beat change)
so , i get up , and i look , how the fuck , was i took , by these drugs , in my book , like a crook , on a nook , im ashamed , of this day , that is laid , out to me , look at me , fuck it man , look at him , look at slim , im a wreck , im a mess , im a worn out dress , that needs to be fixed , so i get , off my ass , one more time , for this rhyme , and put it , in a record , and sell it like dime---bags , no longer in rags , filled with money , something to brag---about . . .
guess thats why they call it rags to riches mother fucker
Ace Bandage
The one and only.
^^ I didn't read any of that, nor do I plan to.
Let us have a moment of silence for the slain punctuation marks in the above post.
:bows head in remembrance::
Let us have a moment of silence for the slain punctuation marks in the above post.
:bows head in remembrance::
haha maybe i overdid it
Shifty
O.G.
Actually, it's not bad IMO.
But the phrasing mimics Eminem's, and I could do without the last sentence.
Maybe try to be a little more original. :2 cents:
Why do you just be yourself instead of trying to bite Em.
no he got a honorary black card
Did anybody here actually read the OP? Seriously...
PlasmaTwa2
The Second-Hottest Man in my Mother's Basement
Seriously? Good Lord this implied racism is ridiculous.
who actually ever reads the OP in most threads?
Ace Bandage
The one and only.
Did you mean to say holla? Hola means hello. Holla means "quite yes, give me a shout out, good sir." Or so I've been told...
I read this and just think of some white kid standing in front of his mirror, swinging his arms all around, and butchering a rhyme.
This thread is full of good ol' fashion lulz.
This thread is full of good ol' fashion lulz.
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