Cheers for the kind words. I have half a mind to write up another "real life" incident from when I was 18 but I'm not sure which subsection to post it. You'll understand if/when I post it.
Thank you for your comment on my story: "My Son's Girlfriend Seduces Me"
You said, "Very good, I gave you a five on what you wrote. But I do have two quick comments. 1-You should've mentioned the dinner would be poolside earlier because you changing into a bikini for dinner was a bit out of the blue and a tad confusing until nearer the end."