Any Petra Verkaik fans interested in critiquing a "Petra Croft" screenplay I'm writing? The script even has some excellent illustrations created by a very good artist. I'm not sure if Ms. Verkaik will ever decide to use the screenplay to make her own independent movie but I hope to write the best script I can and would very much appreciate reader feedback. Please contact me via private message if you're interested in looking at the screenplay and its illustrations.