Flash fucking!

[Lynn_Annamarie]

Well hello everybody! I hope I was missed. Lol
It’s been a while! But I’m back with another story! I hope you all like it as much as I did! (I loved it!)

Me and a few new friends went out to a bar to celebrate my friend Henry’s birthday. It was me, Frank, Melissa, Clark and of course, Henry. We all were looking sexy! But believe it or not, I was trying to be good this night! Sex was NOT on the mind, as usually. Keep that in mind as you read the rest of the story!
We all drank a few and were feeling quite a buzz now. We’ve been at this one bar for a good two hours, and we’ve lost Melissa a good 45 minutes ago at this time. I finally got up since I had to use the rest room. “Hey, look for Melissa, kinda weird she ain’t back yet”, Clark said. When I got there, there was a HUGE line for the ladies. I mean at least 14 ladies deep. It wrapped around a wall, so I couldn’t see who else might have been in line.“Fuck this jazz”, I muttered as I eyed the men’s room to do my business. About two seconds of thinking led me to start walking that way. As I opened the door, of course it was empty. I hurried to the stall in the back of the room and pushed it open. I was just as shocked as the two guys and Melissa, who was on her knees with a cock in her mouth. Her eyes were full of bliss and a hint of fear as she looked at me. “Umm, Lynn. Hi. Can you possible get out?” She said as she barely got the cock away from her lips. I was shocked as all hell, so I just turned to leave. But one of the guys stopped me. “Oh no no no. I think she wants to stay. She was looking at our cocks a bit too long for her to want to walk away here!” He was right, I wanted to be on my knees with her now! Sucking and licking all over his impressively sized cock! I still fought a little to get out, but of course I stayed. “Look, I just needed to pee. Can I do that and go?” I said with only half truth. “Yeah yeah, sure. Dude, let her on the john.” They all moved slightly as I slipped past and slid down my pants to pee. I hate to gross you all out, but you know that feeling when you drink too much and you have to pee? And when you finally pee, it’s fucking AMAZING? Yeah, that’s exactly the case. As I closed my eyes and opened my mouth to sigh, one of the guys came to me without me knowing and stuck his cock in my mouth! I opened my eyes instantly, because I knew I was about to get fucked!
I was still peeing as I took my hand to his base and started to jack him off as he slowly pumped into my mouth. He groaned as he took me by my hair. I look over as Melissa was taking all 7 inches of the other guy, right to the back of her throat! I heard from guy friends that she was incredible, but damn! That’s something I have a hard time doing, and she did it like it she was walking. Simple and easy. Now, being the type of woman who likes to compete, I had to at least try to out-do her! I wrapped my lips around my guy, and slowly started to take him in. I had at almost half of his cock in my mouth as his head was pushing on my tonsils. I wasn’t gonna stop there! I pushed his cock farther and started to breathe through my nose. I did not stop! Before I knew it, I was resting my chin on his balls, and his cock begins to twitch! “Oh holy fuck!” I hear the guy say. And from behind me, “Damn Lynn! You’re better then I am! That’s all I needed to hear!
I slid his cock out slowly, for my sake really. “you’re not close to cumming, are you hun?” I ask the gut while I lick the tip of his cock. “No ma’am. Why do you ask?” he says with a smirk. He knows. “You’re gonna fuck my until I cum. That’s why I ask.” I said that as I look into his eyes, and I swear he gets even harder! “I wont argue!” He stands me up and turns me around. “I hope you’re not expecting to fuck me”. I hear Melissa say as I feel the guys hard cock enter me from behind! I moan with intense pleasure! I loved it! Nice and thick! My favorite! He starts pumping faster and faster, pulling down my top to expose my big swaying tits. “Grab them and FUCK MEEEEE!” I scream out fuck me rather loud, but I no longer care! He is fucking me with long and pounding strokes now, I feel my orgasm coming real quick! “Ohhhhh FUUUCKKK! Fuck MEEE!” I cum hard as he gives me on more stroke to finish me off! I look back to see Melissa fully naked and pinned to the wall, also getting fucked well, and loving it! Her look was one of pure sexual bliss, and that made my pussy drip! “Fuck me more!” I say loudly! He says nothing as he trusts back into me hard! I scream with pleasure! “YES! More!” I yell! I don’t care where I am at this point, I’m getting fucked hard and well, and that’s all that matters! After a few more minutes, and another orgasm, the guy tells me to get on my knees! Ohhh yes! I know whats cumming! (Please pardon that pun LOL) I suck him some more as I rub my clit and watch Melissa get ravaged on the wall. Her guy lets her go and she’s on her knees as he shoves his cock into her mouth in a final moan and groan! He unloads his massive cum wad into her mouth! She swallows like a good girl, with a smile! My guy gets my attention as he pulls out and says, “Im gonna cover for fucking face!”. “Bring it on fucker!” I say as I finger my clit harder! “AaaaaHHH Fuck!” He says this as I close my eyes and await his load! I wasn’t disappointed! He literally covered my fucking face with jizz! I was licking my lips as he was still cumming! Oh it was incredible!
The two men quickly got their things and left. Melissa and I were still recovering from getting fucked, as we noticed that they took both of our tops! Just our shirts, but still! We were still in a public place! We cleaned up and just said fuck it. We exited the stall and then the bathroom. As the door opened, we quickly got an ovation from most of the bar! “Fuck it.” I said again and flashed the crowd my tits as we walk back to the table, where our group was still sitting. “Ummm, where are your cloths, and whats in your hair Lynn?”
I guess I didn’t clean up all that well!

~~~~~~Lynn!

 

[ban-one]

Good story, Lynn. Glad you're back

 

[Mr_Stiffy]

I know I already gave you comments but it needs reiterating.... very hot story, lovely lady. Your stories always have a feel of spontaneity to them, and read like the hottest fucking imaginable. They always give me great pleasure to read. Namely, great stirrings down below.

Welcome back and please, don't hesitate to post more.

 

[wdoall]

Bravo!!!!

 

[Mcbrian23]

Your stories are such a turn on. I like to imagine its me in the stories fucking you and making you cum all over my cock. The thought of it makes me reallyyyyyy hard

 

[Automate]

This will be harsh criticism laden with a hell of a lot of sarcasm, but make sure that you understand that I am not writing with the intention of trolling and read and understand all of this with that in mind. I am, however, extremely jaded and cynical and demand a hell of a lot more than I am getting from the story section. The sort of content I would want to read here seems absolutely non-existent (with only one, one thread a long time ago as an exception).

While this thread is not disgustingly horrible as many, many, MANY other threads in this section have been, it is quite mediocre and lacks any kind of literary merits expected from a proper story. It just seems like a textual description of a hardcore porn movie, lacking any kind of depth, character, feeling or imagination one could expect from a properly written story. Additionally.. what is it with the LACK OF PARAGRAPHS, FOR CHRIST'S SAKE? That makes even otherwise readable text seem like a disgusting wall of text!

Then we come to the two examples of the worst eyesores in the story:

We were looking sexy!

This is not a description of any sort. This is just an extremely lazy statement lacking any sort of depth in how exactly the sexiness comes across. The narrative continues in the same vein throughout. Then we get to this point:

“Bring it on fucker!” I say as I finger my clit harder! “AaaaaHHH Fuck!” He says this as I close my eyes and await his load! I wasn’t disappointed! He literally covered my fucking face with jizz! I was licking my lips as he was still cumming! Oh it was incredible!

This is just like reading subtitles to a mediocre hardcore fucking scene, only worse because you're supposed to be able to imagine that this is hot. It isn't. It sounds fake as hell, insults my intelligence rather violently and makes me really hate the supposed characters. They are as empty, shriveled and bones-ground-to-dust dry as the balls and prostates of those fake one-man bukkake cum site actors would be if they were actually jizzing the loads they are spewing from their equally fake plastic monster cocks (additionally, if you get hot and bothered reading the previous sentence, you are part of the problem because then you most likely like this sort of empty fake plastic shit).

It doesn't even matter that the "people" in this "story" have names, because I don't give a rotting festering anal cunt with Fournier's gangrene about what happens to them. This sort of stuff might have titillated me, say, about a decade or two ago, but now it seems merely violently insulting. This sort of yelling is repugnant in videos as well and usually makes me watch it muted (and this is the only saving grace that keeps the excitement from not turning into just mere agression), if I can even watch it at all. The fact that there's visual stimulus when actually watching videos instead of just reading the subtitles to them is the only redeeming factor in porn. Every porn company needs to stop producing the fake yelling shit. It's not like those that want it have a shortage of that material. That should be painfully obvious.

I don't know, maybe the intended target audience for this sort of material is the inexperienced juveline 18-year old boy who has barely just found out about porn and doesn't have a concept of any sort of better material, feebly and mindlessly "thinking" that this is hot shit. Not to say that you won't do well in continuing to write this sort of stuff, since that target sudience is really large, just like with the run-of-the-mill, boring-as-shit fuck-yeah-bitch-aaaah-jizz-cum-eat-sperm-slap-in-the-face-with-cock-repeat sort of typical hardcore porn videos. That shit sells because people generally like shitty mediocre material (true in every context, not just porn or books or comics or TV programs, not just one of these content categories but all of them equally).

Not that this is relevant or meaningful here, since this section seems to be utterly doomed to incest fetishes, barely readable threads with [thread="748330"]DOT DOT DOT[/thread] raping my eyes and spam due to probably moderator apathy (hell, I don't blame them, I wouldn't want to moderate this section either!) with mediocre stories like this barely floating on top of that. Hey, it's the lowest common denominator that makes the cash cow cum though, isn't it?

By the way, I can just immediately imagine the responses to the to that last sentence, coming from a crowd as if I hadn't written anything else at all..

'Oh hey, let's point fingers like retards now and focus on bashing Automate, the hypocrite shithead, making bestiality references with the "making the cash cow cum" remark! Boooo! Hisss!'

:jester:


Hmm... this post does seem quite confrontational now that I proofread and checked and added to it, doesn't it? Oh well. I won't change anything now. Understand the gist of this or don't. Not like it matters one way or another.

 

[Lynn_Annamarie]

Where are your stories? Write, then shit talk.
A simple, "you suck" could have been better then the novel you wrote. But thanks.

 

[ban-one]

Here's a thought: If you don't like what's in this section, don't come in here. Nobody made you come in here or read anything. So either shut the fuck up or get the fuck out. Your choice.




And if you happen to stick around long enough to read this, just out of curiosity, what was the one you did like, huh?

 

[bostonman]

Where are your stories? Write, then shit talk.
A simple, "you suck" could have been better then the novel you wrote. But thanks.

Really? "You suck." Hm. I actually think not. There are too many "you sucks" out there

Here's a thought: If you don't like what's in this section, don't come in here. Nobody made you come in here or read anything. So either shut the fuck up or get the fuck out. Your choice.

And you think you add something to this section by telling people what they should like?

Amazing. When people don't like an opinion, they tell the person to fuck off. Rather than engage in polite, intelligent discussion, it's pretty much just "I'm right. Fuck you. Leave. Ugh, ugh. Beat chest now. "

At least people are predictable.

To the OP, I agree. There is a lot of trash out there. I know I'm going to stop reading something when someone uses CAPS TO DESCRIBE INTENSE ORGASMIC SCREAMING!!!!!

 

[ban-one]

And you think you add something to this section by telling people what they should like?

Amazing. When people don't like an opinion, they tell the person to fuck off. Rather than engage in polite, intelligent discussion, it's pretty much just "I'm right. Fuck you. Leave. Ugh, ugh. Beat chest now. "

What the hell did you read? Here's what I said:

Here's a thought: If you don't like what's in this section, don't come in here. Nobody made you come in here or read anything. So either shut the fuck up or get the fuck out. Your choice.

I didn't tell anyone what they should like. I simply said that no one made you or anyone else come in here nor read anything, and that if you do come in here of your own free will and read something of your own free will that was posted by someone writing something for free in their spare time, leave and don't complain. If you don't like what's here, fine, then don't come in here and don't read what's been posted, and also don't complain about the quality of free stories written by people who aren't professional or paid writers. I didn't think it was necessary (or worth my time) to take the post apart and engage in an in-depth discussion, when a simple, eloquent statement would suffice.

And I am right, and you and everyone else knows it.

At least people are predictable.

You're right. It was very predictable that someone would get confused about how things work around here and argue about something that should be fairly obvious to everyone.

To the OP, I agree. There is a lot of trash out there. I know I'm going to stop reading something when someone uses CAPS TO DESCRIBE INTENSE ORGASMIC SCREAMING!!!!!

Well, looky there! You're doing what I said people should do, and leave if they don't like something. Looks like you can grasp that concept after all.

 

[Stephen1956]

I like your writing, Lynn_AnnaMarie. I would hope, that when sex becomes boring to me, I become jaded and very cynical, a friend will put a well-placed bullet between my eyes and put me out of my misery.

 

[bostonman]

What the hell did you read? Here's what I said:



I didn't tell anyone what they should like. I simply said that no one made you or anyone else come in here nor read anything, and that if you do come in here of your own free will and read something of your own free will that was posted by someone writing something for free in their spare time, leave and don't complain. If you don't like what's here, fine, then don't come in here and don't read what's been posted, and also don't complain about the quality of free stories written by people who aren't professional or paid writers. I didn't think it was necessary (or worth my time) to take the post apart and engage in an in-depth discussion, when a simple, eloquent statement would suffice.

And I am right, and you and everyone else knows it.




You're right. It was very predictable that someone would get confused about how things work around here and argue about something that should be fairly obvious to everyone.




Well, looky there! You're doing what I said people should do, and leave if they don't like something. Looks like you can grasp that concept after all.

Thank you for confirming my original argument.

Tata!

 

[Killer B]

Hot story Lynn. :thumbsup: Keep doing your thing.

 

[MoiDixMois]

Wow. Good shit. Woulda been sweet wo witness that!

 

[Renegade1Oh]

Very Good Story Lynn!!:naughtynaughty: And Welcome Back Babe!!:drawheart:

 

[rosemarym]

enjoyed your story immensely. thank you

 

[bigboy10a]

Very nice. You write better than I could. Keep up the good work. Thanks

 

[johnnerd]

very good and entertaiming story!!!