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A rustic Spring Holiday [a genuine Short(y) story]

Shorty V

We will all be free once.
I'm not really a natural storyteller and English isn't my mother tongue, but man, did I have a memorable experience during my spring holiday last week. So here's my first Shorty(y) story. Please don't tell it any further.

Well, I thought I had booked a nice midweek holiday in this not too expensive rustic guesthouse, but after arrival my wife complained furiously about its lack of facilities, with only a small bed in a small bedroom, and about the fact that we had to share the very rustic bathroom with other visiting couples.

So my fun was quickly spoiled, and a raging headache put out, which made me decide to leave my wife alone for a moment, so she could come back to her senses. I grabbed a towel and walked out of the bedroom, desperately wanting to suppress my headache by taking a nice hot bath. I arrived at the bathroom, opened the unlocked door and I almost froze into a pillar of salt when I saw that it was already taken by two rustic ladies, a lovely brunette and a beautiful redhead. They didn't notice me at all and apparently seemed to like each other quite a bit. The dark-haired lady was rubbing her girlfriend's clit with her left breast nipple and the redhead lady was softly moaning in delight. I was completely flabbergasted and forgot to breathe for more than a handful :tongue: seconds.

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In a rare moment of cleverness (what on earth happened to me?) I locked the door, started breathing again and walked to the bathtub. The lesbian beauties still gave no sign that they had noticed me. I found myself thinking "what the heck, I want some holiday fun" and I reached out to help the rustic brunette to please her girl. No sign of surprise, not a word of protest. Together we brought her girlfriend to a thrilling climax. I went completely beside myself, fingering that gorgeous redhead's hairy pussy intensely, sucking her breasts like a frantic maniac. After she finally exploded I got myself undressed. We dived into the small bathtub and had our fun for another couple of hours. They were the bosses, I just had to follow their lead and I was kissed, caressed, wanked, sucked and fucked in all kinds of positions, as if they would never stop.

Nothing was said, nothing was asked. No names were given, no addresses exchanged.
Everything happened in the most natural delicious flow.

The two beauties made me cum time after time, again and again, until I had nothing left. My headache was completely gone, but my legs were shaky and my penis was burning painfully when I stumbled out of the bathroom, whilst the two girlfriends, giggling behind my back, had another go at each other.

I limped through the guesthouse's corridor, back to our small rustic bedroom. I quietly opened the door. There she was, the Love of my Life, the Woman of my Dreams, still in clothes, lying asleep peacefully. I crawled on the bed, kissed her awake and asked her if she was OK. She smiled her magical smile and apologized for her raging outburst earlier that afternoon. I smiled back and stroked her hair. Despite the pain I felt something was happening down in my pants ... again.

"And how's your headache, honey?" she asked concerned.
"Completely gone", I said, "that bath was great. I love you. Let's make love."

Shorty V

:)

[The Bathroom Beauties are portrayed by Ildiko and Georgina Lempin.]
 
The only complaint I have is that you are not supposed to post pictures in this section under any circumstances. Other than that, pretty much flawless grammar and an actual story, so that's good. That's the third decent one I've ever seen in here.
 

Shorty V

We will all be free once.
The only complaint I have is that you are not supposed to post pictures in this section under any circumstances. Other than that, pretty much flawless grammar and an actual story, so that's good. That's the third decent one I've ever seen in here.

Thanks for your constructive and mainly positive reaction! :)

You might be right about the rules about images. But since this particular picture inspired me to write the story, I guess that this 'shorty' has to be moved to some kind of a 'masturbation' thread. I'll rethink and/or ask a moderator about the possibilities.
 
Thanks for your constructive and mainly positive reaction! :)

You might be right about the rules about images. But since this particular picture inspired me to write the story, I guess that this 'shorty' has to be moved to some kind of a 'masturbation' thread. I'll rethink and/or ask a moderator about the possibilities.

Ahhhh.. so the picture functions as your muse, so to speak. I didn't even think about that. The only way I've seen pictures used in this section is as filler material for mediocre or completely retarded stories, so that colored my perspective pretty strongly. But posting a single picture that inspired the story and is essentially descriptive of it.. that sort of use should possibly be allowed, as far as I'm concerned. Except that it would lead to all sorts of whining when some people get their pictures deleted and some not. Still, it would be better to post as a normal link and not as a hotlink.

By the way, my comment is more positive than you might think, because I mean that I've now only seen three decent stories during the existence of this entire section. Not that I end up here too often, since this usually leads to me hitting the report button like a machine gun and getting extremely aggravated at retards who blatantly ignore every kind of rule and guideline.
 

Shorty V

We will all be free once.
Ahhhh.. so the picture functions as your muse, so to speak. [....]

Yes.

In fact, in general, I watch erotic and pornographic material mainly to stimulate and broaden my own fantasies.
Sometimes such a fantasy develops into a whole story, but only in my head. Before today I never thought of writing something down.

Anyway, I'm really pleased that you like the story.
I was only being cautious about your appreciation at first, because of the rather severe expression you are not supposed to post pictures in this section under any circumstances.

I wrote a PM to one of the moderators if my story is allowed here, and let's wait and see if he is even more severe. ;)
If the story has to be moved to a more picture-esque thread, then I personally won't have any problems with that.

Btw, do you recall the titles/links of the other stories you liked?
I'm curious to read them.
Maybe I'll even add some erotic pictures to them ... but only in my head, OK? :D
 

Shorty V

We will all be free once.
I especially appreciated the first example (by Alyssa Rose) for its subtility. The 2nd story was OK, well written IMHO, being more explicit, but it didn't really arouse me.

Considering my own writing: there's still so much to improve. Today, it just felt like a fun thing to do.
If I want to continue to write (which I'm far from sure of), I think I'll carry on using my inspiring muses and images (moving or not moving). They feed my head ... and other parts of my body, too.
;)
 
Ahhhh.. so the picture functions as your muse, so to speak. I didn't even think about that. The only way I've seen pictures used in this section is as filler material for mediocre or completely retarded stories, so that colored my perspective pretty strongly. But posting a single picture that inspired the story and is essentially descriptive of it.. that sort of use should possibly be allowed, as far as I'm concerned. Except that it would lead to all sorts of whining when some people get their pictures deleted and some not. Still, it would be better to post as a normal link and not as a hotlink.

By the way, my comment is more positive than you might think, because I mean that I've now only seen three decent stories during the existence of this entire section. Not that I end up here too often, since this usually leads to me hitting the report button like a machine gun and getting extremely aggravated at retards who blatantly ignore every kind of rule and guideline.
How about an alternative?

- Post the story here, and ...
- Include a link to another location (say, Tumblr) where the story has pictures added in-line.

Like Shorty, I use still pictures in-line to visualize the setup, while still including prose to more detail and desire.

I would use this approach, except I'm unsure the mods would like me posting a link to another social forum. I'll leave it up to the board admins and mods to advise further.
 
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