erotic fiction

Hello friends! I'm sharing this excerpt from my novel, "Crave." I'm still in the editing stages and love sharing different pieces of the story. I'm totally open to constructive criticism, especially since I'm still working on it...so, enjoy! Edgar was late for our evening rendezvous. I peered...

Kara was practicing her moves for the fourth time that day. It had only been the start of practice and she was already getting sick of what she was doing. It was boring, and frankly she didn't really want to keep pushing herself much longer. However, she continued to do it for the sake of her...